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The Aprentice Poet's avatar

Thanks for saying for me what I haven't been able to say out loud.

Jodi Proctor's avatar

Painfully relatable. Loved this.

V. Walker | Poet's avatar

Excellent. Beautiful. Love the ending repetition to hammer the message home. A creative way to tell this story.

Chris Wilkins's avatar

The words arranged just so... to help the reader better understand... just how helpless we sometimes are. Beautiful piece.

trinity elizabeth's avatar

Yes! Thank you so much I’m glad you enjoyed :)